Miscellaneous: Last Act,Last Scene

something close, something reflective
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  • Avatar | written by joey 1450 days ago Rating: 0 | Rate comment: + -

    beautifully written!

  • Avatar | written by denny 1449 days ago Rating: 0 | Rate comment: + -

    there is no doubt that you write well as it shows in this piece. but the most beautiful part of this entire writng according to me is that the conversation is built on a simple topic of raining. sometimes we just go for big situations and attractive vocabulary and we feel that such simple subject will lead to bad writing but guys and gals this young lady has proved us all wrong and showed us that even simple topics like these can lead to interesting and impressive piece of writing. great start keep it up reema..... hope to see some more of your writings in future.....

  • Avatar | written by garfield79 1449 days ago Rating: 0 | Rate comment: + -

    really beautiful, almost poetic.


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